You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care their children in the evening in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart shows the information about the percentage of how parents spent
time
taking care of children in 2020 in the evening. It is clear from the chart that the rate
of fathers
is the lowest than the rate
of mothers in all time
.
Overall
, the mothers' percentage of time
in dressing is higher than fathers
only about 71%. Also
, the rate
of them playing games time
directly rises than in dressing time
from 21% to 70%.
What is more, the rate
time
of playing games is the same time
of preparing for bed that fathers
spent on their children and fathers
slowly increased homework time
by 10%. Moreover
, the percentage of women's time
in playing games directly fell down to dressing time
by about 25%. Furthermore
, both of them rate
preparing for bedtime time
as the same as the mother's In homework time
by 50%.rggfghgghhll. Dghhb. Guy.Submitted by m on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words time, rate, fathers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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