The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
The bar chart gives information about the proportion differences
of
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between
people
who were born in and outside Australia
living
in three different areas in two years 1995 and 2010.
It is obvious that most Correct word choice
and living
people
lives
in the cities, Change the verb form
live
whereas
towns
were the place that had the least residents of the three.
Looking at the left chart, we can see that there were half the people
who born in Australia
lived in the city in 1995. The figure for rural dwellers was 30% and 20% of the people
stayed at
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in
towns
. There were 60% of the residents, who lived in the city, born outside Australia
. The percentage of the
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apply
people
who lived in rural space
and Fix the agreement mistake
spaces
towns
was 40% and 20% respectively.
According to
the rest of the bar chart, around 65% of the residents lived in cities and both rural areas and towns
had 15% each type. Moving on to people
who born outside Australia
, 80% was the figure for people
who live in cities, 10% of the people
lived in towns
and there was only 5% lived in rural areas in 2010.Submitted by tram.vomy on
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