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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first tie this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. explain why you think your friend would enjoy a campling holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Ava, I hope you and your family are fine and healthy. I grated to hear that, you are planning to go out for camping
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 summer. As you asked me for some pieces of advice. I believe that you will get good memories and excellent memorable experiences with a lot of things that you can do on your camping trip.
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, fishing, swimming, riding a boat, taking a long work to get some fresh air from nature or you can try high-risk sports
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 as mountain climbing. Having said that, all activities above would help you to reface and rejuvenate.
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, you might face some problems there because sleeping in a tent is quite inconvenient.
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, the place is full of insects, so sometimes it would be a bit irritating. I would recommend you bring insect preventive sprays or creams with you.
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, I would love to accompany you on your trip because I want to have some good times and experiences with you on your trip. Please, let me know about the time and date when we go. Best regards, Alice
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