The charts below show the results of a survey of the primary exercise objectives and locations of a selected group of adults between 20 and 50 years of age.

#show #results #survey #exercise #objectives #locations #group #adults #years #age

The pie charts illustrate the outcome of a survey which depicts the various factors that lead to happiness in adults under 30 and above that age.

Overall

, the maximum number of

people

in both categories describe that achievement in work gives them a sense of satisfaction with 31% in the age group younger than 30 and 1 per cent more in

people

older. The second-highest activity that

people

find pleasure in is being engaged in their hobbies, with 22% denoting the former and 24%, the latter. In comparison to the younger population, to the middle-aged individuals, financial security provides them solace( 20%)

while

, to the youth maintaining a good appearance brings them joy(18%).

Additionally

, the significant difference which is observed is

people

above 30 like spending time with their family

whereas

, the youth like travelling (15%). Other factors which are not specified by the former(10%) and latter(14%) are found to be the least.

Submitted by anuvsim on Fri Jul 28 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.

▼

Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

▼

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

153 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

4
band
The car is a disastrous 20th Century invention that has made the world's cities more dangerous and polluted, as well as being responsible for the deaths of millions of people in accidents. Do your agree or disagree?
All around in the cities, car is common transportation that started in 20th century until now. However, it gave bad effectlike pollution and manu accidents and the death of million people. I agree with the statement because more disadvantages from using car.
4.5
band
Government needs to spend money to encourage the development of sport and art for school students, rather than to support professional sports and art evrnts. Do you agree or disagree ?
It is argued that the states needs to spend funds in the sports and art sector in high school rather than spend money on professional sports and art events . This essay agree with the statement because lack of development in this sector led talented students to choose another subjects and schools also need high experienced teachers for enhance student perfromance.
6
band
Some people think that people who chose a job early and keep doing are more likely to get satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Choosing a job and sticking to it is often seen as the key to a successful and satisfying career life. However, this is not necessarily the case, as there are many advantages to frequently changing jobs. This essay will discuss the merits of both approaches and argue that neither is necessarily more likely to lead to a satisfying career life.
5.5
band
Some people think that the popularity of the cinemas around the world has declined. Do you agree or disagree?
There is a widely held perception that less people go to cinema, nowadays. Without any shadow of doubt I agree with this statement. There are two principal reasons for this.
<4
band
In some places, young people find it difficult to communicate with older people. Why is this? What are the solutions? .
As the living style has changed, it affects the way that young people communicate with olderly. There are three main reasons why it is hard for children to contact with older people. First of all, children has a few chance to meet older people. Nowadays, the family becomes smaller than the past. Couple do not stay with the their parents, so their children do not have a chance to contact with their grand parents. So, they do not know how to talk or how to communicate with the elders. As a result, they become to not familia and do not have communication skills when they have to communicate with the elders. Second, the older people and young people has different kind of interest. So, it is not easy for children to talk with the elders because they do not know topics to talk. It makes their converstation become silence. Third, they have different life experience. It makes them do not understand to each other. Sometimes, the elders disagree to what the younger people do or think and they...

The charts below show the results of a survey of the primary exercise objectives and locations of a selected group of adults between 20 and 50 years of age.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

The car is a disastrous 20th Century invention that has made the world's cities more dangerous and polluted, as well as being responsible for the deaths of millions of people in accidents. Do your agree or disagree?

Government needs to spend money to encourage the development of sport and art for school students, rather than to support professional sports and art evrnts. Do you agree or disagree ?

Some people think that people who chose a job early and keep doing are more likely to get satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that the popularity of the cinemas around the world has declined. Do you agree or disagree?

In some places, young people find it difficult to communicate with older people. Why is this? What are the solutions? .