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Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people. Write an e-mail to the bookshop. In your e-mail: • suggest a speaker • say what they would contribute to the event • explain why other people would be interested too You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your e-mail as follows: Dear...,

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Dear Sir/Madam, I have seen in a local advert that you are looking for recommendations for a guest speaker for your local upcoming event. I am writing to you with my recommendation. The person
who
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 I recommend is a man called Rob Moore. Rob is an author and podcaster with a view to
help
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people
 become better educated about finances and money. I believe he would bring a lot to the event, and it would be different to the usual health talks. It's not very often you see
people
 at events talking about money and finance, and we're not taught about it in school.
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 would be a great benefit to other
people
, as I'm sure a lot of
people
 would love tips on how to save and invest their money wisely for their future.
Although
 I think talks about health would be extremely important, I
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 think a talk about finance will
also
 be important. Kind Regards Geraint
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