The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.

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The diagram illustrates the process of making a glass usable again.

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, the process consists of six stages, beginning with putting it into a recycle bin and ending up with delivery to the supermarket. First of all, used or empty glass bottles are kept separately in a green recycle bin where the signature of the recycling is displayed. After that, with the use of a vehicle the collected materials are taken to the treatment plant and stored there.

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the collected glasses are washed using a sterilising machine to ensure that the harmful bacteria and germs are totally eliminated. In the next stage, the sterilised bottles are crushed and melted with the crushing and melting machine where they are converted into liquid.

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, the liquids are poured into the moulding machine where they are designed to provide an accurate shape and size of the bottle.

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, they are made ready to be delivered to the supermarkets.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.

Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and hosting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that older school children should learn a wide range of subjects to acquire more knowledge, while other people believe they should learn a small number of subjects in details. Discuss both views and give your opinion

When choosing a job, salary is the most important decision. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, a prison sentence is considered as the best way to decrease crime. However, education is often argued as a more effective way. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve these problems?