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Around the world, solar energy is becoming a more popular source of energy for many households. Why do you think this is so? What are the advantages and disadvantages of using solar energy to power one’s home?

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Worldwide, solar
energy
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 is becoming a more common
source
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 of
energy
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 for several households. In my opinion, there are several merits of using solar
energy
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on
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in
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 households including,
inexpensive
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being inexpensive
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, and
environmentally-friendly
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environmentally friendly
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,
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however
 there are demerits of
this
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 trend namely, unreliable
source
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 of
energy
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, and
extremely
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is extremely
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 expensive. On the one hand, the primary benefit of using solar
energy
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on
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 households is affordable. To illustrate,
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solar
energy
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 is inexpensive compared to traditional
energy
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 namely, fossil fuel,
gas
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and gas
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.
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 is because solar
panels
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made
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are made
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 from cheap materials. Eco-friendly is another benefit of utilizing
the
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solar
energy
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on
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at
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 home.
This
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 is because solar
energy
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do
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 not release
Co2
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a Co2
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 footprint
to
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into
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 the atmosphere.
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,
less
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 Co2 emissions mean less air pollution, which
mean
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means
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 having solar
energy
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on
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in
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 homes
prevent
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prevents
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people
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to
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from
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ges
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get
 serious diseases related
of
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to
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 air contamination namely, cancer, and asthma.
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, these advantages of solar
energy
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is
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are
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 the main reasons why
people
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 prefer to have solar
energy
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 in their homes.
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,
th
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the
 first drawback of solar
energy
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 is
unreliable
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the unreliable
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source
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 of
energ
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energy
.
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due to
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 the fact that if the weather
cloudy
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people
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 cannot have
electrcity
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electricity
 result of no sunlight .
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, if
the
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a
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strong storm hit the solar
panel s
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panels
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 can damage
panels
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, which
mean
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means
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people
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 need to install solar
panels
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on
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a
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apply
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better
locations
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. The second drawback, solar
panels
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reuqire
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require
 too much maintenance.
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, if
the
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dust
enter
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enters
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 the solar
panels
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 can
harmful
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be harmful
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for
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to
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panles
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panels
, which
mean
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means
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people
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 need regular maintenance and
clean
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cleaning
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.
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, solar
energy
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 can cost
people
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 too much money.
To sum up
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, from my perspective, there are different upsides of employing solar
energy
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on
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home
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the home
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 including, cheap , and eco-friendly,
howover
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however
 there are downsides of
this
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 trend namely, unreliable
source
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 of
energy
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, and
extremely
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is extremely
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 expensive.
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