The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now, and plan for its development.
This
map looks at the infrastructure development of the Islip town centre
, compare
to the real situation at the present time.
Change the form of the verb
compared
According to
the illustration, the most significant change is the appearance of the circular road above the centre
. Nowadays, the main road leans
straight across the city, Correct your spelling
leads
whereas
in the future inside downtown
only pedestrians will be allowed to be.
After the reconstructionAdd a comma
,downtown
Add a comma
,
instead
of two of those. However
, there will be a shopping mall across the shops
line. It can be seen, that on the west of the shopping Change to a genitive case
shop's
shops'
centre
, the bus station will appear, while
on the east side
the car park will be placed. Add a comma
,side
Moreover
, new housing will be provided next to the parking place. Also
, the park will be on
his previous place, but its' size will be much less.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, the presented data reveals the increasing of different kinds of facilities spread in the centre
of Islip.Submitted by li_istomina on
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