The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year
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The table illustrates the male and females in the United Kingdom who spent their days doing different activities when they were not engaged in any jobs in an earlier year.
Overall
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, the majority of women were doing housework in the morning
as well as
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in the afternoon.
Whereas
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, most men went to find jobs early morning and watched TV after midday. With regards to morning , the gentlemen, 22% of them went for a job search. Meanwhile, 49% of ladies were involved in household work. Both genders were equally active in doing nothing or sitting around and staying in bed with proportions of 3 and 8% respectively. The male spent the least time drinking before the afternoon. In the same way, women spent only 1% playing games
as well as
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drinking all through the interval. During midday, both men and women were less likely to engage in their various activities. The gentlemen were busy watching TV being the highest per cent of fourteen and being less engaged staying in bed with a per cent only.
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, the ladies were stuck doing the same household work which fell to 21% from 49%. They were not fond of staying in bed playing sports too so their contribution towards these was zero throughout the period.

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