The pie chart and table below give information on tourists visiting Australia.

The pie chart and table below give information on tourists visiting Australia.
The given pie chart and table illustrate information about visitors to
Australia
such
as their nationalities and average length of stay.
Overall
, most visitors to
Australia
come from Asia followed by Europe.
In addition
, American people have the longest time spent there. As can be seen, Asians have the highest population of tourists visiting
Australia
with 37% which is just 2% more than Europeans
while
Americans and citizens from the rest of the world visited the country with 18% and 10% respectively. Regarding the table, the longest travel time (16 days) to
Australia
is for American dwellers whose popular activities are swimming and sunbathing and who prefer accommodation in a campground or caravan park. Plus, the average length of stay for European people is 2 days less than for USA tourists and they usually stay in 4 stars hotels and are interested in sightseeing.
Although
Asians have the maximum number of tourists in the country, they just stay for a week in 5-star hotels. They enjoy sightseeing the most as well. It is
also
noteworthy to mention that, other travellers from other places, like Americans, usually stay in a campground or caravan park for 10 days and they go surfing for most of their time.
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