Since people can study through the internet, schools have become unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Since the internet had been popular used, it's very convenient that people can easily use it to obtain a lot of information.
This
also
forms a new education system named E-
school
where all teaching is online. Some say that
school
can already be replaced as it is not necessary nowadays. In my opinion, I will say that schools are still a must for
children
.
Firstly
,
although
the internet contains a variety of knowledge, it requires users to search and filter out the info that they need.
This
skill though can be trained through time, it might be too hard for a child. If offspring can’t use it well
while
there is no one supervising them, the consequences might be they didn’t learn well and sufficiently enough for them to pursue studies
further
.
For example
,
children
that aren’t mature enough might not find enough resources to support their learning. In the meanwhile, the kid doesn’t have enough self-control to learn science or subject they are not interested
.
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They might just get loss in playing internet games
instead
.
Overall
,
school
is still needed to lead the younger generation to obtain appropriate and enough knowledge.
Moreover
, another important thing is the connection and friendship that can build in the
school
,
this
cannot be replaced by E-
school
. In
school
, where
children
had to be with each other all day long, they will learn how to get
along with
people that had different personalities.
For instance
, one will meet classmates that are different, but to finish the task teacher gave, they will need to find a way to gather everyone and solve it together.
Consequently
, they can make friends
while
learning how to cooperate with others. In conclusion, schools are an important place where
children
are guided to obtain general education.
Nevertheless
, they can learn to make friends and form values
such
as being helpful and tolerant.
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