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Some people think they have right to use as much fresh water as they want, while others believe that government should strictly control the use of fresh water as it is limited resource. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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A handful of individuals reckon that they have the right to consume
water
 as much as they want;
however
, others deem that the regime ought to restrict in
order
 to
use
 of
water
 for various purposes as it is a limited
resource
 on the earth. I agree with the latter viewpoint.
This
 essay is an attempt to delineate both the conflicting viewpoints
along with
 my opinion precisely in the forthcoming paragraphs. To embark with, there are some reasons why a few citizens assert that they can
use
water
 in their life as much as they need
water
. The predominant one is that a number of mankind pay fees in
order
 to get
water
, so they
use
water
 as much as they want. They have a dearth of knowledge that it is a limited
resource
 on the earth
due to
this
 they
use
 more
water
. They do not think about the next generation that they would
also
 need
water
 for living a good life.
However
, I advocate those who opine that the authorities ought to take some effective measures in
order
 to save
water
.
Firstly
, everyone knows that
water
 is an essential source without it no one can live.
Instead
 of drinking ,
water
 it is
also
 used for various purposes
such
 as washing clothes, cooking and washing utensils. The regime should aware the populace that
water
 is a limited
resource
 and they should
use
 less
water
 so it could be preserved for the next generation.
Secondly
, the administrations ought to supply limited
water
 so people could
use
 less
water
.
This
 would be more worthwhile in
order
 to save
water
. In Vietnam,
for instance
, 67% of people
use
 less
water
 because they were
awared
Correct your spelling
warned
 by the lawmakers that it is a limited
resource
 on the earth. In conclusion,
although
 some human beings think that they have the right to
use
water
 as much as they need, I am in favour of those who opine that the authorities should do some restrictions for using
water
 by the masses.
Submitted by MANJOT on

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