The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
the diagram illustrates the way that instant
noodles
are made from flour
to being solid in 8 steps which are ready to eat by customers.
overall
, the process of making noodles
can be divided into 3 clear sets of stages: starting with harvesting flour
, making dough
, cooking the noodles
and storing them. all you need to produce the noodles
are flour
, water, oil, vegetables and spices with some special equipment.
In the first stage, the flour
is transferred from the truck to the storage silos, and then
the flour
is taken to the mixture machine with some ingredients such
as water and oil mix them up to have a dough
.
After the flour
became a dough
, it is shaped like sheets by the rollers tool, next it is formed like stripes. Finally
, the dough
strips have the last
look as noodles
discs
. After ,that the oil is heated and ready to put the noodles
discs
on it to make these discs
cooked and dried.
The last
stage, when the noodles
discs
are cooked, is packed in special cups with two ingredients which are vegetables and spices. The cups stuck with labels and now it's ready to deliver to shops and became on the store shelves.Submitted by is3raa6 on
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