The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
the diagram illustrates the way that instant
noodles
are made from Use synonyms
flour
to being solid in 8 steps which are ready to eat by customers.
Use synonyms
overall
, the process of making Linking Words
noodles
can be divided into 3 clear sets of stages: starting with harvesting Use synonyms
flour
, making Use synonyms
dough
, cooking the Use synonyms
noodles
and storing them. all you need to produce the Use synonyms
noodles
are Use synonyms
flour
, water, oil, vegetables and spices with some special equipment.
In the first stage, the Use synonyms
flour
is transferred from the truck to the storage silos, and Use synonyms
then
the Linking Words
flour
is taken to the mixture machine with some ingredients Use synonyms
such
as water and oil mix them up to have a Linking Words
dough
.
After the Use synonyms
flour
became a Use synonyms
dough
, it is shaped like sheets by the rollers tool, next it is formed like stripes. Use synonyms
Finally
, the Linking Words
dough
strips have the Use synonyms
last
look as Linking Words
noodles
Use synonyms
discs
. After ,that the oil is heated and ready to put the Use synonyms
noodles
Use synonyms
discs
on it to make these Use synonyms
discs
cooked and dried.
The Use synonyms
last
stage, when the Linking Words
noodles
Use synonyms
discs
are cooked, is packed in special cups with two ingredients which are vegetables and spices. The cups stuck with labels and now it's ready to deliver to shops and became on the store shelves.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words noodles, flour, dough, discs with synonyms.
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