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Some people think teachers should give students homework every day. Others think that this can cause a lot of issues. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While
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 it is commonly believed that
students
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 ought to be given
homework
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 daily by their
teachers
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, there are others who argue that
this
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 can lead to many problems. In my opinion,
students
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 should receive
homework
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 every day because
this
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 can help them in numerous aspects. On the one hand,
according to
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 some, schools should give
homework
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 to
students
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 because it helps them to have enough practice at home, and I agree.
In other words
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, when
students
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 do their
homework
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 at home, they will understand their lessons more clearly.
For example
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, if
students
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 do more mathematics practice at home, they will remember the formulae easily, and they can solve their problems quickly.
Therefore
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, they can answer examination questions well.
Moreover
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, when
students
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 have
homework
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, they will not waste their time doing other things,
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 as playing computer games or going out with their friends.
This
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 is because they have to show their
homework
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 to their
teachers
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 the following day.
On the other hand
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, some people claim that
students
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 will face many problems when they have regular
homework
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. One reason is that they will not have enough rest.
That is
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 to say, some
students
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 usually stay up late to complete their
homework
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, and because of
this
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, they often cannot concentrate in class the next day.
For instance
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, in Japan and Korea, all the
teachers
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 in the class give their
students
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 daily
homework
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, and because of
this
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, they have issues in class.
As a result
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, they often feel stressed. Another reason is that some children cannot spend time with their family and friends after school (M2). When they have
homework
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, they are often too busy.
To sum up
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,
although
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 people have different opinions, I think that
homework
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 is important for
students
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, and
teachers
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 must give them daily
homework
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 to help them improve.

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cohesion
Link ideas to each other better. Use small links every time you move to a new point.
task response
End with a strong conclusion that restates your view clearly.
grammar
Keep sentences short and simple to keep ideas clear.
accuracy
Check small mis-steps in spelling and word use to be exact.
strength
You show both sides and your view is clear.
strength
The essay has a clear form: opening, two body parts, and a ending.
strength
You use examples to show ideas.
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