You have seen an advertisement for the post of Quality Assurance Manager at a factory. You want to apply for this job. Write a letter to the employer. In your letter: - talk about your educational background - describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job - explain why you want to work for that company.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my strong interest in the Quality Assurance Manager

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recently advertised on LinkedIn. Enclosed with

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letter is my resume, with

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details of my professional experience and academic background. I graduated with

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from the University of Boston with a degree in engineering and I had an MBA in Business Control until 2024. I am currently working as a Quality Assurance Analyst at McDonald’s. In

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, I have had the opportunity to improve my leadership skill since I am a leader of fifth employees, and I am

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able to control a production line with the mandatory software in

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field. Previously, I worked for three years as a Junior at the same

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and the same company until became an analyst. Not only do my qualifications and work experience make me a perfect fit for

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, but my personality is

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well-suited to becoming a manager. I am a critical thinking and leadership individual, who is able to solve problems at a production line and deal with employees highly well. I am extremely grateful for your consideration of my application for

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. Should you need

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information, I can be reached at 322-1072 during business hours or at [email protected] at any time. I look forward to discussing

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role opportunity. Yours faithfully, Livia Barbosa

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
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thirdly
in additional
moreover
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for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

226 words

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