In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Having your own
house
is considered big stress relief in the majority of places on earth. And
this
is the reason why citizens always prefer their own
house
rather than renting
one
.
This
happens because living in a rented
house
, you never know when you get kicked out as people living there find themselves a liability, at the same time, those who have their own
house
know that no
one
can mess with them and they are always relaxed. In
this
essay, I will explain the above reasons in detail and will throw light on my opinion i.e., why I consider it a negative situation.
Firstly
, we know that psychologically humans always have obsessions with owning different materials, no matter if that's a
house
, car, etc. They always find themselves in their comfort zone whenever they have owned these. And
this
is the cause why people always tend to buy houses of their own and do not live in a rented
house
.
Secondly
, those who live in a rented
house
are always afraid for their future and worried about not having a
House
of their own.
However
, they miss the fact that how much expensive and difficult buying a
house
could be. Especially buying in
installments
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cost them even more.
For example
, if a person wants to purchase a
house
in Pakistan, they at least need to have 20 million with them and if they want to finance it through the bank,
one
must have nearly 40 million which is almost doubled. In
last
,
this
is why I feel like buying a
house
and spending so much on it shouldn't be supported at all. If we look at rents so
one
can easily adjust there and invest the rest of the money somewhere reliable place.
For instance
, those who live in rent how a home might invest their money in import-export businesses and make a handsome amount from it.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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