A magazine wants to inculde contributions from its reders for an article called ‘the book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter Describe what this book was about Explain how this book influenced you say whether this book would be likely to influence other people.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am one of the readers of your well-known article called "The

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that influenced me most". I am writing

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letter to provide my participation in that column about the

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which really motivated me because of its good content. The

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influenced

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me a lot is 'the experiment of Truth' written by Mahatma Gandhi, the national father of India.

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is all about how a human's good and bad work called "Karma" treats them in

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accordingly

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, It helped me to understand if you do good work in

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whether in professional

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or in relationships, you would receive fruitful results back.

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, if you do wrong things in

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, it would give you the same wrong result in

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life

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. As

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book

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taught me basic philosophy in

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an inspirational way with simple terms, which fascinated me a lot.

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, it gives ample examples of real

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and

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good and bad people with their task

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as evidence.

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, its philosophical comprehensiveness could be

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motivated other people as well. With that in mind, I think

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book

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should create a great positive impact on the reader, especially who engage in a crime or not speaking the truth. At

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, I would like you to consider my contribution to

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article and publish the content of the

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which I aforementioned. I hope my response is helpful to you. Thanking you, Yours Sincerely, Rychand Mhera

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

247 words

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