A magazine wants to inculde contributions from its reders for an article called ‘the book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter Describe what this book was about Explain how this book influenced you say whether this book would be likely to influence other people.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am one of the readers of your well-known article called "The
book
that influenced me most". I am writing
this
letter to provide my participation in that column about the
book
which really motivated me because of its good content. The
book
influenced
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me a lot is 'the experiment of Truth' written by Mahatma Gandhi, the national father of India.
This
is all about how a human's good and bad work called "Karma" treats them in
life
accordingly
.
In other words
, It helped me to understand if you do good work in
life
whether in professional
life
or in relationships, you would receive fruitful results back.
However
, if you do wrong things in
life
, it would give you the same wrong result in
a
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life
. As
this
book
taught me basic philosophy in
such
an inspirational way with simple terms, which fascinated me a lot.
Also
, it gives ample examples of real
life
and
compare
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good and bad people with their task
accordingly
as evidence.
Thus
, its philosophical comprehensiveness could be
also
motivated other people as well. With that in mind, I think
this
book
should create a great positive impact on the reader, especially who engage in a crime or not speaking the truth. At
last
, I would like you to consider my contribution to
this
article and publish the content of the
book
which I aforementioned. I hope my response is helpful to you. Thanking you, Yours Sincerely, Rychand Mhera
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  • thirdly
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