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In some countries, using the internet in schools is getting more popular. In this a positive or negative development?

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During covid-13, work-from-home and online education were adopted but, in some countries with less developed
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 infrastructure, the economy and literacy worsen. Nowadays, the use of the
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 for study has been easily adopted. In my opinion, it's a positive development because it is and will help pupils in their education and the international or interschool cooperation with ease.
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, the teachers are available with disciples only for a certain duration which makes them feel lost and they are in search of supporting agents who can answer their queries.
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, if they have a chance to search the
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 for their problems, they will be able to solve them quickly.
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, they will have opportunities to be involved in other activities and they can grow broadly.
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, with the use of the
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, there is a possibility of true improvement.
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, during covid or even now, the inter-school or international participation of
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 in some competitions or any cooperation is still not economical. But if those events can be organised virtually, even
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 from remote places would have a chance to participate.
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, the competitiveness of those online events and the participants will be richer
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 if the events were organised physically, which is more effective, lesser would be the candidates which results in low-quality competition. In
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 provides a broad scope of development. In conclusion, consumption of the
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 in educational institutions brings more opportunities to
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, teachers, schools
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 the whole of academia.
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, online education makes learning simple and creating groups of like-minded people convenient over physical participation.
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 get familiar with extra information
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, teachers are able to provide updated and latest content to the children by using the
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