An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is certainly true that the popularity of online shopping is rising. In the paragraphs to come, I discuss the pros and cons of purchasing online. In my opinion, it does more good than harm to society. On the one hand, one evident benefit of buying online is saving
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.
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,
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only need to choose their items and pay it online which is both faster and easier than going to a shopping mall using either their private cars or public transportation system. Not only do they save more
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by staying at
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, but
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they don't pollute the air
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the traffic decreases.
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, some recent surveys and research showed that as the popularity of online shopping increases in a city, the traffic, air pollution, and noise pollution diminish too which really motivates
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to stay at
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and buy online
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of going out shopping.
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,
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have more
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that can relax or spend some more quality
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with their family and friends. If I want to recommend one useful use of the Internet, I will suggest online shopping since it offers a wide variety of advantages to both society and nature.
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, online shopping has some drawbacks since it guides
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to a sedentary lifestyle that causes some negative impacts on the health of individuals in society. To put it
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, when
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stay at
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surfing the net using their computer, they have no activity that in future can lead to blood pressure, being stressful, and
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some kinds of depression.
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, during Coronavirus I started online shopping which was a very interesting experience for me but after a
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, I found out that I gained some extra weight.
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, I was stressed and nervous most of the
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as I was all the
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at
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and had no special activity.
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, no matter what cons online shopping brings, In my opinion, its advantages far outweigh the disadvantages since it brings more
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and convenience for
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and has some positive impacts
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as decreasing air pollution and traffic that without a doubt have undeniable merits for
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and nature.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • lack of physical interaction
  • try or test products
  • potential for fraud or scams
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