Some people think living in big cities is bad for people's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Since the majority proportion of

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living in the metropolis at

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moment, there are some issues of how city life can affect

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's body health individually up for debate, I would certainly go

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idea, I will present my perspectives in

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essay

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pollution crisis has been highly concentrated nowadays, some metropolis has large industrial areas, and those factories emit not only loads of contaminations but large quantities of

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pollutants which are worsening the

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quality,

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each government has revised their statutory regulations to deal with these problems respectively,

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, most of the cities still found it tricky and considered it to be out of control,

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being exposed to polluted

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will increase our risk of developing chronic illnesses

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as heart disease, lung cancer, which are considered to be bad for the residents.

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, high pressure can affect

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's mental health indeed, a lot of citizens are suffering from the high pressure of substantial competition in their company and social groups, they are urged to be more competitive to maintain their quality of living unconsciously, workers need to try their best to pursue a better future by catching any opportunities to get promoted,

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, social groups can considerably compete as well, mankind has always obsessed by power,

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,

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started to become more likely to compare with each other, turns out they will do anything that might render them to reach the goals whatever it takes, eventually, a vicious circle has been formed.

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, residing in the big cities might have its own pros, but living in the cities can be tiresome and harmful most of the time caused of the peer pressure and devastated

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quality, for those

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who might intend to do

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as urban migration should think twice for these cons before they make an action.