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Some people think living in big cities is bad for people's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree

#people #cities #health
Since the majority proportion of
people
 living in the metropolis at
this
 moment, there are some issues of how city life can affect
people
's body health individually up for debate, I would certainly go
along with
this
 idea, I will present my perspectives in
this
 essay
subsequently
.
To begin
 with, the
air
 pollution crisis has been highly concentrated nowadays, some metropolis has large industrial areas, and those factories emit not only loads of contaminations but large quantities of
air
 pollutants which are worsening the
air
 quality,
although
 each government has revised their statutory regulations to deal with these problems respectively,
nevertheless
, most of the cities still found it tricky and considered it to be out of control,
thus
,
consequently
 being exposed to polluted
air
 will increase our risk of developing chronic illnesses
such
 as heart disease, lung cancer, which are considered to be bad for the residents.
On the other hand
, high pressure can affect
people
's mental health indeed, a lot of citizens are suffering from the high pressure of substantial competition in their company and social groups, they are urged to be more competitive to maintain their quality of living unconsciously, workers need to try their best to pursue a better future by catching any opportunities to get promoted,
in addition
, social groups can considerably compete as well, mankind has always obsessed by power,
as a result
,
people
 started to become more likely to compare with each other, turns out they will do anything that might render them to reach the goals whatever it takes, eventually, a vicious circle has been formed.
To sum up
, residing in the big cities might have its own pros, but living in the cities can be tiresome and harmful most of the time caused of the peer pressure and devastated
air
 quality, for those
people
 who might intend to do
such
 as urban migration should think twice for these cons before they make an action.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • respiratory problems
  • population density
  • stress levels
  • mental health issues
  • sedentary lifestyles
  • healthcare facilities
  • cardiovascular diseases
  • psychological well-being
  • recreational areas
  • social networks
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