The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010.

The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010.
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The bar chart illustrates the
coffee
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produced in four nations: Brazil, Colombia, Indonesia, and Vietnam between 1990 and 2010. Units are measured in
million
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tones.
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, it is evident that
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the statistics for
coffee
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in the three countries rose significantly, the opposite was true for Indonesia, which decreased over the period. At the beginning of 1990, the production of
coffee
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in Brazil stood at 0.7
million
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tonnes and surged gradually each year before reaching a peak at nearly 2
million
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tonnes
at the end
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of the time scale. At the same time, the quantity of
coffee
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manufactured in Columbia was the second highest at 0.6
million
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tonnes in 1990 compared to others before witnessing a sharp plummet to 0.3
million
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until the end of the timespan. Regarding the two other countries, Indonesia’s
coffee
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consumption rose to 0.2
million
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in 1990 and peaked at 0.5
million
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five years later; after that, it went down to 0.3
at the end
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of 2007.
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, Viet’s
coffee
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was produced the least compared to the rest, with only 0.1
million
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tones at first and grew steadily to 0.3
million
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tones 2007
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