The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010.

The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the
coffee
produced in four nations: Brazil, Colombia, Indonesia, and Vietnam between 1990 and 2010. Units are measured in
million
tones.
Overall
, it is evident that
while
the statistics for
coffee
in the three countries rose significantly, the opposite was true for Indonesia, which decreased over the period. At the beginning of 1990, the production of
coffee
in Brazil stood at 0.7
million
tonnes and surged gradually each year before reaching a peak at nearly 2
million
tonnes
at the end
of the time scale. At the same time, the quantity of
coffee
manufactured in Columbia was the second highest at 0.6
million
tonnes in 1990 compared to others before witnessing a sharp plummet to 0.3
million
until the end of the timespan. Regarding the two other countries, Indonesia’s
coffee
consumption rose to 0.2
million
in 1990 and peaked at 0.5
million
five years later; after that, it went down to 0.3
at the end
of 2007.
Additionally
, Viet’s
coffee
was produced the least compared to the rest, with only 0.1
million
tones at first and grew steadily to 0.3
million
tones 2007
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