Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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It has always been a controversial topic to judge the

personality

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and characteristics of

people

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according to

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their appearance and dressing style.

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, I strongly believe that there is a close relationship between the appearance and

personality

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people

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, and I oppose

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viewpoint. In

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essay, I shall

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my stance on

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topic.

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, in today's interconnected and modern world, most humans tend to

use

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wear

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clothes

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that are more comfortable for them to feel more relaxed.

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people

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prefer to put on garb that causes no physical and mental damage and difficulty for them

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being comfortable since everyone knows that being healthy is far more important than everything,

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, most

people

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choose their

clothes

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based on their comfort not culture or their beliefs.

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, some recent surveys and research proved that tight

clothes

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are detrimental for both men and women

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increasing the level of stress and making them nervous.

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, the majority of humans opt for

clothes

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that are convenient, and they don't choose

attire

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based on their cultures or characteristics.

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, nowadays most

people

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are into fashion and follow them every day. To put it

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, they tend to put on a wide variety of

attire

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during weekdays and on weekends that are in various styles including trendy modern

clothes

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and traditional

attire

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since it is not a good idea to deduce someone's

personality

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according to

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dressing styles.

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, I had lots of friends

that

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used to wear

clothes

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with special paintings and signs on them. Not only do they have no information about these signs, but

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they

wore

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wear

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them in incorrect situations based on their meanings since they put them on just for fun, entertainment, and to show off. If I want to help my friends

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apply

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buy special

attire

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, I will choose that

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whether the

attire

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is beautiful on their body or not. I don't pay attention to the meaning of signs and

clothes

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To conclude

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although

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there are some

people

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who interpret

people

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personality

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based on their

clothes

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, I am of the opinion that the majority of

people

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put on

clothes

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that are more convenient or sometimes they wear different

attire

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by following fashions and they don't choose garb regarding their beliefs, character, and culture

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, it is not a good idea to judge individuals

according to

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their dressing styles.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

402 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

garments
traditional attire
sartorial choices
expressive style
cultural identity
psychological implications
non-verbal cues
globalization
perceptions
professional demeanor
societal norms
economic constraints
subcultures
fashion movements
individualism
stereotype

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