Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
It has always been a controversial topic to judge the
personality
and characteristics of people
according to
their appearance and dressing style. However
, I strongly believe that there is a close relationship between the appearance and personality
of people
, and I oppose this
viewpoint. In this
essay, I shall further
my stance on this
topic.
Firstly
, in today's interconnected and modern world, most humans tend to use
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wear
clothes
that are more comfortable for them to feel more relaxed. In other words
, people
prefer to put on garb that causes no physical and mental damage and difficulty for them as well as
being comfortable since everyone knows that being healthy is far more important than everything, therefore
, most people
choose their clothes
based on their comfort not culture or their beliefs. For instance
, some recent surveys and research proved that tight clothes
are detrimental for both men and women due to
increasing the level of stress and making them nervous. As a result
, the majority of humans opt for clothes
that are convenient, and they don't choose attire
based on their cultures or characteristics.
Secondly
, nowadays most people
are into fashion and follow them every day. To put it in other words
, they tend to put on a wide variety of attire
during weekdays and on weekends that are in various styles including trendy modern clothes
and traditional attire
since it is not a good idea to deduce someone's personality
according to
dressing styles. For instance
, I had lots of friends that
used to wear Correct pronoun usage
who
clothes
with special paintings and signs on them. Not only do they have no information about these signs, but also
they wore
them in incorrect situations based on their meanings since they put them on just for fun, entertainment, and to show off. If I want to help my friends Wrong verb form
wear
to
buy special Verb problem
apply
attire
, I will choose that according to
whether the attire
is beautiful on their body or not. I don't pay attention to the meaning of signs and clothes
.
To conclude
, although
there are some people
who interpret people
's personality
based on their clothes
, I am of the opinion that the majority of people
put on clothes
that are more convenient or sometimes they wear different attire
by following fashions and they don't choose garb regarding their beliefs, character, and culture therefore
, it is not a good idea to judge individuals according to
their dressing styles.Submitted by yavari1993 on
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task achievement
Ensure that all aspects of the essay prompt are addressed, and the writer's stance on the topic is clearly articulated. Refrain from generalizing and ensure that specific examples are used to support the writer's points.
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