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The table below shows the preferred TV programs by the different age groups in a european country in 2012.

The table below shows the preferred TV programs by the different age groups in a european country in 2012.
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Overall
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, the table illustrates the proportion of
age
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 groups in children, teenage and adults, and which programs they watched in Europe in 2012
Firstly
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, cartoons was seems to be a popular tv show among the ages of 11 to 15, which was watched by 29% of kids
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 18% in the ages 16 to 20 and significantly low at 4% from 21 to 25.
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 films, soap opera and sports program were considerably watched
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 by these three
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 groups with an average rate of 18 to 20%, but soap opera was less interesting among teenagers at only 12% . In terms of news programs, the
age
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 group of 11 to 15 for significantly found bored,
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, it was watched by 6%, but 19% and 23% of the
age
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 group 16 to 20 and 21 to 25 enjoyed watching it. At the
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 TV dramas were preferred by an around average percentage of 10% in a given
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 group.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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