You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Rina, I am your
neighbor
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. I moved into
this
house
last
week with my family, but, we did not get a chance to introduce ourselves. My name is XYZ, and I live with my husband and two children. We both husband and wife are working full time and unable to supervise our kids, that's why, we were looking for a quiet
neighborhood
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, where our children can grow up in a noble society. After coming to the new house, we were planning to meet our
neighbors
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and close relatives, that's why, we are going to arrange an event where everyone can bring their children with them, and have some snacks and dinners.
Firstly
, we will introduce ourselves to everyone,
then
, cut the cake and the rest of the party will be enjoyed by dancing and singing. The dress code for the party will be black and it will start from 6:00 pm to 11:00 pm. On
this
occasion, I cannot forget my nearest neighbor, that's why I am sending
this
invitation to you and inviting you to
this
small party. I am requesting you not to bring any gifts, as, we want to enjoy only. Hope to see you soon. Yours neighbour XYZ
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Although the letter covers all required points, it would be beneficial to expand slightly on the plans for the party to make them clearer. For example, detailing types of snacks or dinner might provide a more complete response.
coherence cohesion
Consider making each paragraph focus on a single idea. For example, separate the introduction of yourself from the description of party plans.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is friendly and inviting, which is appropriate for the context.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear and well-structured logical flow, making it easy to follow.
coherence cohesion
You successfully included a polite greeting at the beginning and a warm closing at the end, which enhances the overall tone of the letter.
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