The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the
number
of trips
per year made by children aged 5-12 in a single country between 1990 and 2010, using different types of transportation
to travel from school. The transportation
modes include car passenger
, walking, cycling, walking and Fix the agreement mistake
passengers
bus
, and bus
.
As shown in the chart, in 1990, the number
of trips
made by children as car passengers was approximately 4 million
. However
, the most popular mode of transportation
in 1990 was walking, with nearly 13 million
trips
. Additionally
, cycling accounted for almost 6 million
trips
in the same year. Walking combined with bus
trips
was slightly less than 6 million
, while
bus
trips
without walking accounted for more than 6 million
.
Moving on to 2010, there were significant changes in the transportation
preferences of children. The number
of car passenger trips
increased to almost 11 million
. Conversely
, the number
of walking trips
decreased to 6 million
. Cycling also
experienced a decline, with only 2 million
trips
in 2010. However
, the combined trips
of walking and bus
showed little change during those 20 years.
In conclusion, in 1990, the previous generation had a higher number
of trips
using various types of transportation
. Nevertheless
, as time progresses, each new generation may experience different changes in their transportation
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