The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the
number
of Use synonyms
trips
per year made by children aged 5-12 in a single country between 1990 and 2010, using different types of Use synonyms
transportation
to travel from school. The Use synonyms
transportation
modes include car Use synonyms
passenger
, walking, cycling, walking and Fix the agreement mistake
passengers
bus
, and Use synonyms
bus
.
As shown in the chart, in 1990, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
trips
made by children as car passengers was approximately 4 Use synonyms
million
. Use synonyms
However
, the most popular mode of Linking Words
transportation
in 1990 was walking, with nearly 13 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
trips
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, cycling accounted for almost 6 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
trips
in the same year. Walking combined with Use synonyms
bus
Use synonyms
trips
was slightly less than 6 Use synonyms
million
, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
bus
Use synonyms
trips
without walking accounted for more than 6 Use synonyms
million
.
Moving on to 2010, there were significant changes in the Use synonyms
transportation
preferences of children. The Use synonyms
number
of car passenger Use synonyms
trips
increased to almost 11 Use synonyms
million
. Use synonyms
Conversely
, the Linking Words
number
of walking Use synonyms
trips
decreased to 6 Use synonyms
million
. Cycling Use synonyms
also
experienced a decline, with only 2 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
trips
in 2010. Use synonyms
However
, the combined Linking Words
trips
of walking and Use synonyms
bus
showed little change during those 20 years.
In conclusion, in 1990, the previous generation had a higher Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
trips
using various types of Use synonyms
transportation
. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, as time progresses, each new generation may experience different changes in their Linking Words
transportation
choices.Use synonyms
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