A Museum Near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary / unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary / unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary / unpaid work. In your letter - explain why you want to do voluntary / unpaid work at the museum - describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful - give details of when you would be available for work

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope
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letter finds you well. I am writing
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letter to show my interest
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the advertisement that you put in front of the museum. I would like to apply as a volunteer at the museum. Allow me to elaborate
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the details.
Firstly
, I am a third-year college student at Santonio University and my major is in
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.
Furthermore
, my summer holiday is approaching and
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would like to submit my resume.
Additionally
, my campus program
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their
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students to participate in experiencing
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job. As I have mentioned, I have wide range
knowledge
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about flora and I am keen interest in enhancing my understanding
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agriculture.
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, it aligns perfectly with my interest and my studies. I would greatly appreciate
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your acceptance, and I will be available
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this
weekend.
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, the museum place is quite close to my home so it is convenient for me to work
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part-time there. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Jun
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Enthusiastic
  • Volunteer
  • Part-time
  • Unpaid work
  • Museum director
  • Skills and qualities
  • Customer service
  • Organization
  • Team player
  • Flexible
  • Reliable
  • Positive attitude
  • Availability
  • Professional goals
  • Community contribution
  • References
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