The table gives information about the amount of money in developing countries by the USA, EU countries and other countries from 2006 to 2010.
The table provides a comprehensive comparison of the amount of
money
in 3 kinds developing
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of developing
country
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countries
USA
, EU and Others) during 5 years period between 2006 and 2010.
Overall
, the total amount of money
gradually increased between 2006 to 2010. USA
had the highest number of capital from 2006 to 2010. In contrary, Other Correct article usage
The USA
coutries
remained the least Correct your spelling
countries
of
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money
resources in five distict
periods.
Upon the observation, Correct your spelling
distinct
USA
experienced slowly increased from 9.8 in 2006 to 11 in the next year. Correct article usage
the USA
Furthermore
, there was a significant rise in 2008 around to
17. Change preposition
apply
However
, the USA
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US
money
slightly decreased in 2019 (16.7) and it reached the
peak which accounts for 20.3 in 2010.
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On the other hand
, EU
and other countries had relatively similar Correct article usage
the EU
about
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the
amount of Correct article usage
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money
. In 2006, they started from
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additon
, they encountered the same pattern Correct your spelling
addition
with
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as
USA
where their Correct article usage
the USA
capitals
continuously went up to 3.8 and 3.5 in 2008 and slowly declined in 2009. Fix the agreement mistake
capital
Finally
, both EU
and other Correct article usage
the EU
countried
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countries
bounched
back to their peaks in 2010 around 4.1 and 3.7, respectively.Correct your spelling
bounced
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