Some people think spending a lot on birthdays and marriage celebration is a waste of money but others think it is important the young people and society. Discess both views and give you opinion.

Expenditures on occasional events

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as birthdays or marriages have always been a heated topic.

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some people are of the opinion that

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spending is part of the heritage , others think it is an unnecessary

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. In my view, I agree with the latter opinion.

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events should be announced publicly and shared with our loved ones as

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is what our forefathers have been doing for centuries and

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is what our parents are expecting from their children.

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the idea is appealing, nowadays, the

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practices is high and it is creating a huge burden for the younger generation. Especially,

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, in my ,country the male should cover the entire wedding

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, alleviating

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for the young ones to facilitate their marriage

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without worrying about the associated

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is essential .

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practice should not be considered

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a revolution against our own heritage , but it should be viewed in line with current

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expectancies and expenses. In many countries, to cover

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expenses both sides the father and the mother have to work in order to have a decent

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in the past , working males in general was enough to cover

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expenditures.

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, reducing

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costs from the young ones' shoulders is essential to meet

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demands. More importantly, nowadays, many countries like Japan or China are demanding their youth to get married and have children in order to meet the country's needs . In a recent publication , Japan's population decreased by 800,000.

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, reducing marriage costs goes in line with national needs.

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, the reason for some to demand a big celebration

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for marriage and other occasions is clear, but it should be in line and viewed within today's expectancies. Overburdening our children with high costs can have detrimental effects not only on them

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but

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on our national fabric.