The pie chart show what makes people most happy for two different age groups. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided pie graphs illustrate the main reasons that drive
people
toward happiness for people
under 30 and over 30. Overall
, it is evident from the chart that both groups have consensus on some factors such
as achievement at work while
they are likely incompatible in other factors such
as travelling.
To embark, the two pie charts depict the most highest and common reason for joy is achievement at work, the
proportion for Change preposition
with the
people
under 30 at 31% as opposed to people
over 30 accounted for 32% . in the same time, they concur that the lowest is for other factors for both charts for people
under30 at 14 while
for people
over 30 is 10%.
the second-ranked factor after work achievement poses into
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people
over 30 prefer to secure money more by 20%. at home by per cent 14%.Submitted by alaan0542 on
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