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In some countries, university education is free for every citizen. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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In order to popularize
further
 study levels to all walks of life, learning services in many countries around the world are free of charge for every student which contributed hugely to the potential future of that country,
however
,
this
 project might seem to lack
of
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benefits for people in the
education
 field.
This
 essay will discuss both sides of free college
education
. On the one hand, a case in point of beneficial free university
education
 can be seen in India, where the government have decided to launch free teaching service for thousands of underprivileged students to have a good opportunity to reach advanced knowledge,
thus
 increasing labour and employee sources
as well as
 produced decent literate population for the country in general and that area
in particular
.
Furthermore
,
this
 project is able to consolidate the significance of teaching and studying especially at an enhanced level
such
 as the university where students can be navigated to future occupations.
On the other hand
, an institution that cost nothing can be associated with disadvantages for
education
-related people namely teachers, educators or tutors. For those people whose mainstream income comes from the act of conveying lectures and emphasizing comprehension for the pupil, free
education
,
therefore
 cannot ensure a sustainable salary. Take China for an example, numerous
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Chinese university lecturers have been voicing their objections to the free
education
 plans of the Ministry of
Education
due to
 the fact that their revenue has been curbed since the implementation. In conclusion, it is undeniable that no tuition schooling campaign can fetch an enormous victory in the improvement of human resources,
however
 insufficient incomes source can be the hamper.
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