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Do you believe that self-driving cars will become common in the near future? Why or why not? Support your answer with reasons and expamles from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, with technological development autonomous vehicles become more and more frequent on roadways. With increasing, popularity some automobile brands give huge attention to developing their opportunities because of their huge market rates.
Therefore
 research promotes to
car
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 industry to try to prepare their consumer if any demands begin to come through. I strongly believe that self-driving
cars
 will conquer the automobile industry because they are safer and
also
 make
environment
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 clearer because of the absent carbon footage.
To begin
 with, autonomous
buses
 we can confidently insist that in the near
future
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 they will increase their presence on our roads. They are becoming popular because of
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the absence
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 of carbon footage.
For example
, with electric
buses
 countries have an opportunity to not think about air pollution from public transport which has a huge impact on society. Self-driving
buses
also
 solve the problem of stressed drivers because of traffic congestion. In some cities, there are specific lines for
buses
 but even that type of solution did not minimize drivers' mistake rate.
Therefore
 self-driving public transportation is safer for both drivers and passengers. On the one hand, increasing the rate of using autonomous
cars
 will reduce
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 rate because
according to
 statistics 90 % of accidents are connected to driver's mistakes. On the other ,hand self-driving
cars
 will keep rules which will prevent lethal outcomes of many accidents. In conclusion, I reiterate my opinion that self-driving
cars
 will conquer the automobile industry because of their safety and comfortableness for users.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • autonomous vehicles
  • artificial intelligence (AI)
  • machine learning
  • innovations
  • technological revolution
  • smart infrastructure
  • regulatory framework
  • safety protocols
  • mass adoption
  • user trust
  • green technology
  • carbon footprint
  • disruptive technology
  • labor displacement
  • economic efficiency
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