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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Learning a new
language
in addition
 to the mother tongue looks necessary if you want to work or go on a journey abroad, it is a belief of a group of
people
,
in contrast
, the others these reasons are not sufficient for learning a new
language
, and I personally agree with the second group. If someone decides to work in another country, they should know at least the basic of the destination spoken
language
,
however
, English is a common
language
 and many
people
 can speak more or less, but in many countries, inhabitants prefer to speak in their mother tongue
language
.
for example
, many of us think that Canada is an English-spoken country,
however
, it is likely impossible to find a job without knowing French. Other
people
 believe that learning a
language
 should not be limited to work or travel reasons. Some
people
 like to know more about other cultures and understand their novels and poems books,
moreover
, they maybe want to communicate with others and watch movies. There are many facilities to translate these like a breeze,
for instance
, online pdf and image or even voice translator, but it should be considered that it will never transfer the emotion and feeling in the original one. In conclusion, I believe that learning more languages can open a gate to knowing the world more specifically, so if anyone has time and the ability to do it, must do it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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