These days the fashions in clothing are constantly changing. Is this affecting individuals and the environment in a positive or a negative way? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your knowledge and experience.

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Today there are many people influenced by clothing and
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,especially teenagers
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all have bad effects social and
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,In my ,essay I will explore the benefits and the negative way of
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behaviour with examples .
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cyberspace and a huge ,change people be more open to other thing things , the most one we can all observe fashions around the world it is too easier to see and tends to imitate it ,specifically youth and teenagers ,for several reasons ,exemplify the celebrities of social media,they like to wear the same
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even it is related to own culture or not ,that
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,that
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gave them a feeling of confidence, Another point individual prefer by spend money to bought
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clothes
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to show others they wear brands Instance' shakier ' ,In another said , and I strongly believe that has many unhealthy impacts, we can start with the human being's health when he bought and wears undesirable things every
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by the long
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the feeling of self will change , the money of models say that the keeping wears the
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that depending to your test or to your choice created exhaustion senses for boday , over
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we will lose part of our self ,which makes happiness dramatically go down .,
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the sales of
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have decreased in some way because of the change in
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every day that makes many companies can't be in the same age
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, I oppose the view of
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because I think it is west of my
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and money , I like to do everything that belongs to my needs and senses without caring for any things else. and the people should understand that point and wait before they decide to buy.
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