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You eat in your college cafeteria everyday lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements.

#college #cafeteria #lunchtime #improvements
Dear sir, I am writing
this
 letter to suggest some reforms in our
college
 cafeteria. As
,
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 I am using
this
 facility during lunchtime
in
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 weekdays. I, Harsh, studying in the post-graduation course at St.Lawrence
College
 since 2021.
In addition
 to
this
, visiting the
college
 canteen is my routine
for
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 weekdays.
Moreover
, what I like the most about
this
 place is the
food
 service.
Also
, the
management
 provides various facilities,
such
 as
,
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 free internet and indoor games.
Additionally
, the quality of
food
 products is up to the mark.
However
, it requires several changes, one of them
is
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 the cost of
food
.
Secondly
, if they serve more different cuisine, which leads to attracting
students
.
Furthermore
, if
college
management
 subsidises the price of
food
, will be a win-win situation for cafe
management
 and
students
, because the cost of
food
 price drastically increased since COVID-19 hit.
Besides
, the canteen may take feedback, when they introduce new dish in the menu. It helps
management
 to identify what
students
 prefer,
due to
 that,
students
 eat out in canteen meal rather than outside
food
. Expecting
a
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prompt action. Yours faithfully, Harsh Trivedi
Submitted by harshtrivedi78 on

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