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Doctors, other health workers and teachers make great contribution to the society and so should be paid more than entertainment and sports celebraties. Do you agree or disagree?

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Health and education have always been considered a top priority at personal
as well as
 societal levels. For most of us, academics is essential to make a mark and earn a good salary
while
 at the same time, a country without excellent medical support would not be able to save its people. These two are essential sectors and show a country's reflection outside the world. These days debate is ongoing as to whether people from these departments should earn more than celebrities from media and games. I completely agree with the viewpoint and
this
 essay will describe details in support of my opinion. First of all, in the medical field, a very sincere commitment and dedication are required by doctors and nurses. It does involve a lot of time and effort to save any patient. It is very disappointing that after many years of continuous reading and devotion to patient care, a medical graduate does not earn a respectable salary.
Likewise
 is the position of a teacher who was earlier considered a nation-maker. 
In contrast
, a celebrity takes a significant amount of money to home depending on the role he gets to play.
Similarly
, a sports player earns way more than any of the two above-mentioned professions. These are two major sources of creative and entertainment departments and depending on the perfection and success of their work, earning amount increases.
Additionally
, they often earn extra by doing stage shows etc.
Therefore
 in my belief, I completely agree with the division of earnings in teachings and medicine units and as per society's essential working and entertainment field.
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