The diagram below show a small local museum and its surroundings in 1957 and 2007.

The diagram below show a small local museum and its surroundings in 1957 and 2007.
The given maps illustrate the transformation of the museum and its grounds between 1957 and 2007. From an
overall
perspective, it is evident that the museum and its environs witnessed significant changes, cutting down some of the natural beauty
while
extending the museum space and dividing more details for exhibition activities. From 1957 to 2007, the number of trees located in the northwest dropped remarkably in the 50 years of the building's surroundings, and
therefore
, only a few trees remained in the northwest area of the gallery. In the centre of the area,
this
building is expanded to a new souvenir shop on the left, and both new special exhibitions and an education centre at the top of the building. In the heart of the gallery, the national history exhibition was replaced with a local history room.
In addition
, the local history room, the main hall, and the store room were both replaced with the reception and the coffee shop. In front of the souvenir shop, a new entrance was built to create the best customer experience journey. After all of the trees were cut in the west, a car park was built to serve visitors.
Additionally
, the small trail leading from the main road to the gallery has been removed because visitors can easily access
this
destination without anything obstructing their view.
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