The maps show about the transformation of Felixstone city fro 1967 to 2001.

The maps show about the transformation of Felixstone city fro 1967 to 2001.
The given maps show information about the transformation of Felixstowe City from 1967 to 2001. The below information describes maps. In 1967, there is a golf course, shops, a high street, farmland, a dress, a cafe, a hotel, a sea, a marina, a pier and a fish market.
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there is a golf course, shops, apartments,a high street, a swimming pool, a hotel,
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tennis courts, a car park, dunes, wind turbines, a sea, a cafe and a public beach. There are so many
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place between 1967 to 2001. In 2001 a car park, public beach, private beach, sea size in been increased and wind turbines has been developed. There is
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great growth in Felixstowe City. In conclusion, from 1967 to 2001, there are so many updates
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as wind turbines, private beaches, public beaches, tennis courts, apartments and car parks. The above data describe maps.
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