Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.
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Chorleywood village is illustrated in the map from 1868 to 1994. Most of the development has been observed
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1970 to 1994 and the least development was seen
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to 1883 time period. Moderate transformations have been recorded from 1883 to 1970.
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the construction of the railway in 1909, it can be seen that most of the
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occupied the areas close to the railway from 1883 to 1970.
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, when the
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increased around the motorway
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1970 to 1994. More area towards the motorway and the
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is being developed as there is more connectivity to the other cities and villages. The
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chorleywood
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course. Over the years from1868
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1994, the population has increased gradually which has
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of the village.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Steadily
  • Pivotal events
  • Significant change
  • Transportation links
  • Commuter village
  • Residential areas
  • Commercial areas
  • Public facilities
  • Infrastructure
  • Environmental impact
  • Community life
  • Conservation efforts
  • Maintaining character
  • Vicinity
  • Unique aspects
  • Common challenges
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