Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is an indisputable fact that junk food has become tremendously common among people that numerous restaurants have been
opened
since a few years ago. Replace the word
open
That is
why, many individuals including me believe that traditional fare and methods can be overshadowed by processed food because of sundry reasons such
as being tasty, cheap and easily accessible. This
issue will be argued in upcoming paragraphs
To begin
with, being cost-efficient and delicious play
an axial role in making decisions. Fix the agreement mistake
plays
Public
, particularly the working class, seek affordable foods and since providing nutritious ingredients in order to make Correct article usage
The public
home-made
cuisines is pricey, they prefer to consume industrially produced dishes. Correct your spelling
homemade
For instance
, buying required
substances to cook our traditional soap costs almost three hamburgers. Correct article usage
the required
Additionally
, because of using some additives and preservatives, which are hazardous in many cases, ready-made products are more pleasant than home-based ones. Masses, thus
, are more obsessed with eating packaged meals.
Furthermore
, as fast food is served quickly, it is well-appreciated by individuals. Nowadays, most of the population are
career-oriented and at no time can they spend much time Correct subject-verb agreement
is
on
preparing traditional foods, which are time-consuming. Change preposition
apply
For example
, becoming exhausted after roughly eleven hours of working and commuting, there is not adequate energy available for employees to cook. That is
to say, having a draining day induces workers to eat out.
To sum up
, in spite of the fact that convenience foods contain hazardous stuff, they can be considered as an alternative to nutritious
diet because of being Correct article usage
a nutritious
well-flavored
, time-saving and serving Change the spelling
well-flavoured
with
low prices. It is Change preposition
at
also
highly recommended that demerits
of unhealthy substances must be shown on social media so as to encourage society toward Correct article usage
the demerits
nourishments
.Fix the agreement mistake
nourishment
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