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Some people say that subjects like arts, music, drama and creative writing are more beneficial to children and therefore they need more of these subjects to be included in the timetable. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #subjects #arts #music #drama #children #timetable
There is no denying the fact that
creativity
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 subjects are
essintial
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essential
 to increase
child's
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a child's
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 skills.
While
 it is a commonly held belief that some individuals believe these sections
such
 as arts, music, drama, and creative writing are more important,
also
 it should include in
kid's
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a kid's
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 schedule.
This
 essay will analyse
this
 topic, and express my opinion.
To begin
 with, songs
is
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 the most critical thing in psychology,
also
 there are many people
include
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it
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them
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 in their daily
routin
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routine
routines
.
In other words
,
firstly
 it
crucial
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 in
motivations
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 to
makes
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 you do
a
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hard work in
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 way,
secondly
 sometimes we use it
for
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relax to
study
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and study
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.
In addition
,
crativity
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creativity
 writing soar up their skills to think
in
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about
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 many topics or new stories.
For instance
, write
story
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a story
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 or situation that makes you excited
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 read it. Another point to consider, in schools we shall concern
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 sciences books as a min factor, and list the others like
musicianal
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musicians
musician
 as a second plan. It is
also
 possible to say that, these subjects did not make the
child
 ready
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 adulthood it is just an assist for
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 phase.
Moreover
, drama increased the
child
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child's
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 skills
to
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in
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pretending
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, which means it makes the
child
 sneaky and
liar
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 to take what he wants, it is not necessary to put it in his
timetaple
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timetable
,
also
 it is a talent more than knowledge.
For example
, the student did not need to do it in
his
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 future, maybe if someone has a passion he could join it faculty
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university
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. In conclusion, there
is
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are
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 no easy answers to
this
 question.
In
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 balance,
however
, I tend to believe that these creativity sections are beneficial ,but in
compared
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comparison
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 to other educational learning it is not, eventually I disagree.
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