The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
The shown figure tells us about the process of obtaining
sugar
from sugar
cane
. Overall
, the process of utilizing sugar
from sugar
cane
is quite extensive, starting from growing as its first step
, then
using a centrifuge to separate sugar
as its sixth step
, and later drying and cooling sugar
in the last
.
The procedure through which we utilize sugar
from sugar
cane
involves a total of seven steps. In the very first step
, we have a growing phase that takes around 12 to 18 months. During this
stage
, the sugar
cane
is plotted in soil and waits until it's matured. The second step
involves harvesting in which with the help of a tractor it is harvested and loaded into containers. Similarly
, 3rd step
comprises of crushing of sugar
cane
for its juice followed by its purification with the help of a limestone filter as its 4th step
.
Furthermore
, after filtration, the juice is then
evaporated from which it becomes syrup and this
is stage
5th. Later, in stage
6 we use a centrifuge to extract sugar
crystals from syrup. Whereas
, in stage
7th the sugar
is placed in buckets for drying and cooling.Submitted by khannaughty26 on
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