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University education should be free for all students. To what extent agree or disagree?

#university #education #students
University
 education is an important stage in our life. Everyone has the right to be a student and enter
university
 to learn and to have some knowledge. Government should make universities free. In my perspective, I agree with
this
 sentence for the reason I will specify below.
Firstly
, the fees for the universities are so high.
For example
, international students in the UK have to pay an average amount of £20000 to £30000 a year is unaffordable for some people.
Also
, by having enough knowledge he will have a place in society, and everyone will respect him. If you had a certificate from the
university
, it would help you to apply for a job.
In addition
, from what he learned, he could invent things that would help his country.
Secondly
, the fees of the
university
 are so high, so that many families will not let their kids enter the
university
. If they did not enter a
university
 no one will accept them in jobs, so people will not be able to find jobs and have money to spend on themselves to build a family or spend on their kids if they have.
Also
, They may know bad friends that could let them in trouble. In conclusion, in my , country there are free universities in every city but the student should pass a test. I recommend that the government should make educational institutions free because not everyone can pay the fees.
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