The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).
the provided table depicts information on the number of tourists in
million
that visited some continents; in the period of 15
years
for 4 different
years
from 1990 to 2005.
overall
, it clearly can be seen that Europe has the biggest amount of overseas visitors over the given duration whilst the Middle East has the lowest total of them.
To begin
with, tourism in Africa had witnessed a slight increase over the
years
with about 18, 21,27,29
million
in 1990,1995,2000 and 2005, respectively.
In contrast
, Asia and the Pacific had approximately 60 in 1990,
then
it jumped by 20 to nearly 80 in 1995. The figure of Asia visitors kept increasing until 117 in 2000, five
years
later, it became 136
million
. America's tourists as well continued to grow in number, from 80
million
in 1990 to 113 in 2005.
On the other hand
, the Erupre continent was an attractive destination for overseas visitors since 1990, with around 280 tourists. In 1995, the number rose by 110
million
to 390,
however
,
this
growth almost stabilized in 2000 to reach only 393. Within five
years
, Europe international travellers accessed 400, which was considered the highest sum of all.
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  • significant increase
  • international travel
  • popular destinations
  • economic growth
  • technological advancements
  • ease of travel
  • cultural exchange
  • globalization
  • fluctuations
  • trend
  • millions of travelers
  • annual growth rate
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