The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given Maps depict the changes in the access roads to the

City

Hospital between 2007 and 2010.

Overall

, the vicinity of

City

Hospital was significantly redeveloped during the time period, as a number of places were constructed and several services were added. On the facilities side, in 2007, a car park situated on the west of Hospital Road was for both staff and the public.

However

, by 2010, it was allocated to only staff and new parking for the public was built next to the

city

hospital.

This

new parking zone was located to the west of the Hospital with an entrance to it. As can be seen, the location of the Hospital

City

and two roads didn't change but just two roundabouts were set up at the intersections. It is

also

worth mentioning that the bus stops around Hospital Road were removed and a new bus station was opened to the east of Hospital Road which had two entrances to roundabouts.

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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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