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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant.
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The maps illustrate information about the roadway to reach a hospital in a city in two years 2007 and 2010.
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, it can be seen that some significant changes happened in the second year which made the area around the hospital expanded which mostly occurred in the
car
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park
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, the
roundabouts
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, and the bus station. A public
car
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park
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 was constructed to the east of the main building of the hospital which was connected to the ring
road
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 around the hospital.
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, two
roundabouts
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 were built in the vicinity of the hospital; one of them was located to the near north of the main building and another one was used as the intersection of the hospital
road
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 and the city
road
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. Alongside the changes in the public
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park
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 and the
roundabouts
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, some variations occurred
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 the north side of the hospital. The
car
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park
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 near the northeast gate of the hospital which was used by the staff and the public was allocated to only staff after the renovation.
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, bus stops alongside the hospital
road
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 were demolished and a new bus station was constructed to the west of that
road
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 on the opposite side of the staff
car
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park
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 which could be connected to both
roundabouts
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, park, roundabouts, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • improvements
  • facilitate
  • congestion
  • junctions
  • streamline
  • traffic flow
  • reduce congestion
  • public transport
  • bus station
  • efficiency
  • accessibility
  • parking facilities
  • car park
  • designated
  • alleviate
  • issues
  • adequate space
  • enhancements
  • overall accessibility
  • traffic management
  • convenience
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