The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant.

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The maps illustrate information about the roadway to reach a hospital in a city in two years 2007 and 2010.

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, it can be seen that some significant changes happened in the second year which made the area around the hospital expanded which mostly occurred in the

car

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park

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, the

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, and the bus station. A public

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park

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was constructed to the east of the main building of the hospital which was connected to the ring

road

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around the hospital.

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, two

roundabouts

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were built in the vicinity of the hospital; one of them was located to the near north of the main building and another one was used as the intersection of the hospital

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and the city

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. Alongside the changes in the public

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park

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and the

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, some variations occurred

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the north side of the hospital. The

car

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park

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near the northeast gate of the hospital which was used by the staff and the public was allocated to only staff after the renovation.

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, bus stops alongside the hospital

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were demolished and a new bus station was constructed to the west of that

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on the opposite side of the staff

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which could be connected to both

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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, park, roundabouts, road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

207 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

infrastructure
improvements
facilitate
congestion
junctions
streamline
traffic flow
reduce congestion
public transport
bus station
efficiency
accessibility
parking facilities
car park
designated
alleviate
issues
adequate space
enhancements
overall accessibility
traffic management
convenience

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