The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant.
The maps illustrate information about the roadway to reach a hospital in a city in two years 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that some significant changes happened in the second year which made the area around the hospital expanded which mostly occurred in the
car
park
, the
roundabouts
, and the bus station. A public
car
park
was constructed to the east of the main building of the hospital which was connected to the ring
road
around the hospital.
Also
, two
roundabouts
were built in the vicinity of the hospital; one of them was located to the near north of the main building and another one was used as the intersection of the hospital
road
and the city
road
. Alongside the changes in the public
car
park
and the
roundabouts
, some variations occurred
to
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the north side of the hospital. The
car
park
near the northeast gate of the hospital which was used by the staff and the public was allocated to only staff after the renovation.
Furthermore
, bus stops alongside the hospital
road
were demolished and a new bus station was constructed to the west of that
road
on the opposite side of the staff
car
park
which could be connected to both
roundabouts
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • improvements
  • facilitate
  • congestion
  • junctions
  • streamline
  • traffic flow
  • reduce congestion
  • public transport
  • bus station
  • efficiency
  • accessibility
  • parking facilities
  • car park
  • designated
  • alleviate
  • issues
  • adequate space
  • enhancements
  • overall accessibility
  • traffic management
  • convenience
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