Some people claim that not enough waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their wastes?.

Some individuals claim that not sufficient garbage from
households
is reused . They say that the only method to rising recycling is for authorities to make it
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compulsory. I totally disagree with
this
statement ,
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however
, I would like to recommend some
meaures
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measures
including,
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incentives for people , and
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awareness among
households
in order to
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the issue of
waste
from
homes
. On the one hand, I completely disagree with
idea
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impose
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laws
to force people to
recycling
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their
homes
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rubbish.
This
is because recycling
trash
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from
homes
is expensive, which
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laws
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recycling can make poor
households
under
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burden.
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,
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laws
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recycling increase the rate of poverty, which
mean
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more poverty
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more crime.
On the other hand
, I would like to recommend some actions to tackle
this
issue. The first effective solution
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lawmakers can provide incentives for people to encourage them to
recycling
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their rubbish.
For example
, the governments can give
families
who recycle their
garbage free
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gym membership or access to public transport. The second efficient measure,
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government can launch educational campaigns in order to raise awareness among
households
about the benefits of recycling
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waste
for the environment.
Therefore
, I believe these solutions will contribute make
families
more
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to
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recycling and do beneficial
thing
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to
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the ecosystem.
To sum up
, I strongly disagree with
idea
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of
implement
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laws
in
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term
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of
force
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families
to
recycling
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their
waste
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however
,I would
suggested
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some solutions
including
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, provide incentives for
families
, and raise awareness among
households
in order to eliminate the issue of
waste
from
homes
.
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