The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate at fast-food shops between 2003 and 2013.
The chart visualises how often
the
US citizens be at Correct article usage
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fast-food
restaurants
in the
and
years 2003, 2002 4 2011) Speront fipa restruyants
From 2003 to 2006 the percentage of Correct article usage
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people
who have never eaten at a fast food restaurant has fallen by 1%, but on the other hand
during the same period the number of clients who eat fast food everyday
has Replace the word
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fallen to about 3% of the population
. Since 2006, no other changes have occurred in these segments of the chart.
The major changes can be seen in the groups, who eat in a fast-food
restaurant on a weekly basis (once or several times a week) and in the groups in which people
visit the
fast-food
restaurants
once or twice a month or once a few months. While
in 2006 most of the US citizens ate at such
facilities at least once a week, in 2013 most of the population
did so only once or twice a month. It's clear that the
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fast-food
restaurants
were most popular in 2006 and least popular in 2013. However
the number of people
who eat in such
restaurants
only a few times every year didn't change.
As a whole, with the exception of people
who rarely or never eat fast food and in addition
, the small part of the population
who eat every day, the peak of going to fast-food
restaurants
was reached in 2006 in contrast
with 2013 when most of the population
spent time in them only once or twice a month.Submitted by faiz3177 on
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