The pie chart below shows the main reason why agriculutural land become less productive. The table shows how these causes effected three regions of the world during the 1900s

The pie chart below shows the main reason why agriculutural land become less productive. The table shows how these causes effected three regions of the world during the 1900s
The pie chart outlines the key factors as to why
land
used for agriculture produces less over time,
while
the table gives a breakdown of the effect these
causes
had on agricultural
land
in three regions during the 1990s.
Overall
, over-grazing,
deforestation
, and
over-cultivation
were all significant
causes
of
land
degradation globally.
Furthermore
, Europe had the highest total degraded
land
,
whereas
North America had the least. In terms of the
causes
of
land
degradation, over-grazing was the most significant factor in the
land
with 35% of the
land
being affected in
this
way.
This
was closely followed by
deforestation
(30%) and
over-cultivation
(28%), with the remaining 7% being made up of other
causes
Regarding the table,the North American region had the lowest amount of degraded
land
at just 5%. Of
this
land
, about two-thirds was damaged by
over-cultivation
, just under a third by over-grazing, and a minimal amount by
deforestation
.
In contrast
, almost a quarter (23%) of arable
land
in Europe was degraded. The main factor in Europe was
deforestation
, with 9.8% of total
land
affected in
this
way.
Over-cultivation
and over-grazing were 7.7 % and 5.5% respectively. In Oceania, the main cause of
land
degradation was clearly over-grazing with 11.3% of
land
being affected by
this
out of a total of 13% of
land
degraded in total.
Conversely
,
over-cultivation
appeared to play no role in
this
part of the world,
while
deforestation
affected only a relatively small amount (1.7%)
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