The pie chart below shows the main reason why agriculutural land become less productive. The table shows how these causes effected three regions of the world during the 1900s

The pie chart below shows the main reason why agriculutural land become less productive. The table shows how these causes effected three regions of the world during the 1900s
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The pie chart outlines the key factors as to why
land
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used for agriculture produces less over time,
while
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the table gives a breakdown of the effect these
causes
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had on agricultural
land
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in three regions during the 1990s.
Overall
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, over-grazing,
deforestation
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, and
over-cultivation
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were all significant
causes
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of
land
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degradation globally.
Furthermore
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, Europe had the highest total degraded
land
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,
whereas
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North America had the least. In terms of the
causes
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of
land
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degradation, over-grazing was the most significant factor in the
land
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with 35% of the
land
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being affected in
this
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way.
This
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was closely followed by
deforestation
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(30%) and
over-cultivation
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(28%), with the remaining 7% being made up of other
causes
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Regarding the table,the North American region had the lowest amount of degraded
land
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at just 5%. Of
this
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land
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, about two-thirds was damaged by
over-cultivation
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, just under a third by over-grazing, and a minimal amount by
deforestation
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.
In contrast
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, almost a quarter (23%) of arable
land
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in Europe was degraded. The main factor in Europe was
deforestation
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, with 9.8% of total
land
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affected in
this
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way.
Over-cultivation
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and over-grazing were 7.7 % and 5.5% respectively. In Oceania, the main cause of
land
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degradation was clearly over-grazing with 11.3% of
land
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being affected by
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out of a total of 13% of
land
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degraded in total.
Conversely
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,
over-cultivation
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appeared to play no role in
this
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part of the world,
while
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deforestation
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affected only a relatively small amount (1.7%)
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words land, causes, deforestation, over-cultivation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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