The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in millions) of telephone calls in Finland, divided into three categories, from 1995 – 2004.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in millions) of telephone calls in Finland, divided into three categories, from 1995 – 2004.
The chart below represents the data of the total
minutes
spent in Finland under three different call categories throughout the year 1995-2004. The three different categories are local-
landline
, national and international
landline
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, and mobiles. Where Local
landline
was in the lead of the
minutes
spent and Mobiles
was
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the least spent among the categories. The local
landline
was facing growth in
number
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a number
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of
minutes
used starting at 12.000
million
minutes
by the year 1995 and reaching its peak in 2001 with approximately 17.000
million
minutes
.
However
, from the period 2002 until 2004 local landlines faced a decrease of the number to 12.000
million
going back to where it started. The second highest spent was the national and international
landline
with a steady increase from 6.000
million
in 1995 to just above 10.000
millions
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in 2004.
While
mobiles were rocketing from 2.000
million
between the 3 first year to just under 10.000
million
by 2024.
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