In the modern world, being a resident of an urban area has become a value in itself.
, moving from rural
to urban ones has become a rampant global phenomenon.
there are pros and cons regarding
issue, I fervently believe it is a mostly, yet not utterly, negative development
the reasons explicated in the following paragraphs.
, a country's fundamental economic
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agriculture and natural basic materials, would be drastically weakened by mass migration of the rural population. As a matter of fact, rural
have historically shouldered the vital responsibility of providing infrastructural goods for
and particularly to industries.
, with
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in those
, the pillars of
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will begin to shatter.
, in a country
as Iran with exclusive reliance on saffron exports, fewer farmers
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Saffron fields would mean an immediate plunge in export rates.
, the more people move from rural regions to
, the more oblivion will threaten a country’s authentic cultural identity. Interestingly enough, megacities all around the world resemble each other in a disquieting manner.
, they all appear to be hectic, noisy,
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, and they have fallen into an indiscriminate cultural similarity brought about by the concept of globalization. It is
only in rural
where we may still find cultural authenticity.
, one can compare and contrast Tokyo with any other Japanese small town to discover that the former seems bereft of any authentic identity these days.
, it is not undeniable that people,
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an individual scale, will be gifted with more opportunities for personal development in capitals and bigger
in terms of education and career opportunities. With all due respect to the precious rural values, it is a universally accepted notion that a rural citizen who has received high urban sophistication and education is prone to be of great achievements
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the national life quality, including the small
.
In conclusion, I am personally of the opinion that migration of rural population to the
is a mainly negative issue with devastating consequences
there is some silver lining as well. The negative consequences include, yet are not limited to, the decline in basic goods produced in rural
for main industries, and the disappearance of the nations’ authentic culture, usually well-preserved only in small towns.
, the sophistication provided by big
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national interests.