Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the countryside are decreasing. Is this a positive or negative development?

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In the modern world, being a resident of an urban area has become a value in itself.
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, moving from rural
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to urban ones has become a rampant global phenomenon.
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there are pros and cons regarding
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issue, I fervently believe it is a mostly, yet not utterly, negative development
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the reasons explicated in the following paragraphs.
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, a country's fundamental economic
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agriculture and natural basic materials, would be drastically weakened by mass migration of the rural population. As a matter of fact, rural
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have historically shouldered the vital responsibility of providing infrastructural goods for
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and particularly to industries.
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in those
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, the pillars of
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will begin to shatter.
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, in a country
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as Iran with exclusive reliance on saffron exports, fewer farmers
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Saffron fields would mean an immediate plunge in export rates.
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, the more people move from rural regions to
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, the more oblivion will threaten a country’s authentic cultural identity. Interestingly enough, megacities all around the world resemble each other in a disquieting manner.
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, they all appear to be hectic, noisy,
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, and they have fallen into an indiscriminate cultural similarity brought about by the concept of globalization. It is
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only in rural
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where we may still find cultural authenticity.
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, one can compare and contrast Tokyo with any other Japanese small town to discover that the former seems bereft of any authentic identity these days.
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, it is not undeniable that people,
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an individual scale, will be gifted with more opportunities for personal development in capitals and bigger
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in terms of education and career opportunities. With all due respect to the precious rural values, it is a universally accepted notion that a rural citizen who has received high urban sophistication and education is prone to be of great achievements
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the national life quality, including the small
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. In conclusion, I am personally of the opinion that migration of rural population to the
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is a mainly negative issue with devastating consequences
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there is some silver lining as well. The negative consequences include, yet are not limited to, the decline in basic goods produced in rural
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for main industries, and the disappearance of the nations’ authentic culture, usually well-preserved only in small towns.
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, the sophistication provided by big
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will satisfy
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national interests.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Amenities
  • Economic prospects
  • Overcrowding
  • Traffic congestion
  • Pollution
  • Agricultural abandonment
  • Cultural diversity
  • Innovation
  • Cultural heritage
  • Family ties
  • Infrastructure
  • Public services
  • Sustainable urban planning
  • Rural revitalization
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